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Well I think I did a good job with this picture. I finally took some time to work on the BG and I like the results even if its dark. A next step forward on the path of making cartoons 
And If I did everything right, this picture should speak for itself. For a note, this is young Celestia.
Tell me what you think about it and HUGS FOR EVERYBODY THAT FAV THIS WORK
And If I did everything right, this picture should speak for itself. For a note, this is young Celestia.
Tell me what you think about it and HUGS FOR EVERYBODY THAT FAV THIS WORK
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1200x984px 1.23 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Bonaxor
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactOkay, I've never written a critique before, so excuse any blunder I may make.
With the orange and pink shades against the blue background, this piece is visually appealing; a closer look presents a few issues, however. The mouth seems to be slanting to far to the left, and the eyes are a tad too big. The neck is also too long, and the legs too short. The wings look excellent- I don't know too much about them, though, so they could be anatomically incorrect- and the mane and tail look very dynamic. The tree behind Celestia and the torch look very flat, though, and the torches light could be reflected on her coat, as it is reflected on the tree much farther from the torch.
This piece is very original, with a young Tia exploring a swamp- I can't say I've ever seen THAT before!
I absolutely ADORE the way you drew this picture. The crispness of linework and color on Tia against the foggier background automatically makes you center on it first. But one of my favorite parts is the fog- it looks magical. The only issue I have is, again, the tree behind her looks flat.
I'll remember this picture for quite a while, and it's going straight into my favorites. Great job! ^^