Team Awesome - Reborn Leader :Fortress Wars Part2

Vision: again, great. You captured emotion really well here. I rate more on how well you conveyed your vision to the audience, if that makes sense.

Originality: again, very unique (referring to my last critique). Awesome concept overall.

Technique: Very nice, simple style. However, it seemed a tad bit sloppier than the first comic. Speech bubble outlines were the most notable. Backgrounds a bit bland. Still very good.
11th panel: The sisters' expressions are a little off. (I am comparing it to near-perfection in your other panels, though.)
12th panel: Perspective is a bit off. If Tia's chest is that much bigger than her flank, it would indicate a POV wherein Discord would be smaller in the background.
In panel 13, I personally would have diminished older Celestia's opacity. Oh wait, no I wouldn't have; because I can't draw <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>
The only thing that really bothers me is Discord's eyes. They look dull.
Oh, and the fringe on the coats still looks weird.
And in the 10th panel you didn't draw Discord's horns. DON'T TRY TO HIDE BEHIND TEXT BUBBLES <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/>

Impact: Gripping and awesome. Loved the humor in the first four panels. Awesome moral incorporation.

Overall: This part of the series is what carried the first part. This is the reason I rated part one so highly. Here lies emotion and punch of your interesting storyline.
Onward to part 3!