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Team Awesome by Bonaxor Team Awesome by Bonaxor
Team Awesome is here :D My newest project is alive.

Team Awesome now on Tumblr [link]

ITS ON EQUESTRIA DAILY :D [link]

IMPORTANT! VISIT MY JOURNAL!

Person that helped me a lot. :iconmikkeleb:

Any questions? Please send a note.

All characters belong to :iconfyre-flye: and Hasbro
Comic, idea and whole story is my.
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Vision: I like how you portrayed "Team Awesome" as siblings in the past. Their interactions with eachother while playing are adorable, but it also makes the knowledge of how Discord and Nightmare Moon (or Dream as she's known as here) turn evil later on all the more sad and painful. I do think that the modern design on the house is a little unfitting though. In terms of timeline this should take place several thousand years before the start of the series after all.

Originality: There have been several fan-fics and stories made about the princesses' past before. But like I mentioned before I like how you envision them all (both the princesses and the two bad guys) as a former happy, innocent family. There is certainly room for more stories about these guys in this setting, like their future little plays together. If you wanted you could also later on go into detail about how Discord is a part of the family despite not being a pony or how the family eventually broke apart, but in my opinion I think a more playful and heartwarming setting like this fits better.

Technique: What can I say? I LOVE your artwork! The attention to detail, the well drawn characters, the angles, it's all just a joy to look at. I do think you need to change the colors of the characters speechbubbles though. I often confused Lunas text with Dreams in the beginning.

Impact: What do I think about after reading this? How innocent and happy your childhood is, but also how much things can change over time. Bonds are broken, ties are lost, friendship and love are forgotten. Then again that could just be because of my prior knowledge of the kids' future in the show, and not something you yourself thought of when you drew this.

Overall: I would love to see more of this should you choose to make them. There really is a lot of potential here regardless of what route you would choose to take it down. An Awesome comic indeed.
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Technique: First of all, this comic is extremely well-drawn. The characters are detailed, expressive, and colorful. One extremely small error is that Dream's horn is missing in the middle panel. Other than that, the drawing is superb. I especially like the additions of Faust and Discord breaking the panel lines. Small touches really add to art! The only other thing that could have been slightly improved is the dialogue shapes.
I rated 5 stars because perfection would take a ridiculous amount of time in a comic of this length. I bet this looks very much like what you imagined when you had this idea.

I think mother-Faust has been done before, but never have these four been portrayed in such a way. And the fact that Luna and "Dream" exist simultaneously reveals that they are characters made by Faust in this alternate universe that you have created. It is original, and I very much wish to see where this is going.

The Impact was potent. The initial reveal of the fillies/colt came as a surprise. The comic altered it's mood a bit with Luna's confession, but the carefree resolution revived the jovial attitude and seemed to make Celestia's shame a piece of purposeful early character development. The only dent in the effect was the slight confusion about this new universe you have drawn. Building upon this comic can (and will) only improve our understanding of what you see.

Overall: adorable and awe-inspiring. I really like this comic. It may lack knee-slapping humor but has a twinkling sophistry unparalleled by most comics I've seen. Wonderful job. :D
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186lilly Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student General Artist
wow just wow
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Ask-Tuskless-Axew Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww Luna is such a sweet little sister...
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StormCutie Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
Dis...
Dis is CUTE awesome
Team CUTE awesome
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TheBlueDreamMaker Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HEHE CUTE!
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cwhcubed Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That helmet... isn't that.... the signature Dragonborn helmet?
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Epic comic :D
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Kingofthecouch Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
one does not simply resist the face
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malis22 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
so i dont get it is discord family or relationship or what
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samykhadre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
is Fauticorn's (the ponised of Laurent FAUST) chidrens she adobt them
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malis22 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
still confused but more clear thank you
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samykhadre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
you can ask any other question to me if you like Meow :3 
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