This comic hurts me. My sides have split from laughter and I've got a sore throat through 'DAAAAAAAAAAW-ING'.
The technique at times is a little patchy, but it may just be my awful computer screen quality. It expresses an excellent plot and is true to all of our childhoods where we were all roleplayers- I'm reminded that I'm too old to be pretending to be a Thanagarian lieutenant or aruging over what Clan I am when playing Warriors with my friends, but don't we all do stuff like that, even now? Very accurate in this respect.
It also shows typical the typical sibling relationships- getting into trouble so your sister won't, thinking you're crazy for doing that...once again, true to life. True to a lot of things, actually- I love how Discord is still a clown as a kid and little Luna's sisterly love. I also love how you've used Celestia's old mane as opposed to her current one, and brought Nightmare Moon into the story. I haven't checked other Team Awesome art though- is the reason why she is here ever explained?
This piece also is an excellent example of wit, and not just Discord. Mainly him though. AMAZING.
This comic is the core of imagination in my belief. The art is wonderful, the story is exellent and very easy to follow. You really did show what its like for kid to have an imagination. Coming from me, im autistic so, that means it really shows me that you show the theme imagination very well. I also love how you brought discord, luna, and nightmare moon together. Its a wonderful matchup and a great relationship. You even stunned me when you made it so they were a family. Sincerly, this truly is Team Awesome. So its epic. goodbye. bangoomos11
The technique at times is a little patchy, but it may just be my awful computer screen quality. It expresses an excellent plot and is true to all of our childhoods where we were all roleplayers- I'm reminded that I'm too old to be pretending to be a Thanagarian lieutenant or aruging over what Clan I am when playing Warriors with my friends, but don't we all do stuff like that, even now? Very accurate in this respect.
It also shows typical the typical sibling relationships- getting into trouble so your sister won't, thinking you're crazy for doing that...once again, true to life. True to a lot of things, actually- I love how Discord is still a clown as a kid and little Luna's sisterly love. I also love how you've used Celestia's old mane as opposed to her current one, and brought Nightmare Moon into the story. I haven't checked other Team Awesome art though- is the reason why she is here ever explained?
This piece also is an excellent example of wit, and not just Discord. Mainly him though. AMAZING.
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