"Each Saturday and Sunday I just go up to the highest tower and sit on the balcony, where I can finally read in peace. Ehh if only my sister was like the rest that like to sleep at night... BUT NO... she have to.... " HEY SIS! " Luna yelled into Dream ear, making her drop one of her books on the floor. "WHAT!" Black coated mare screamed, turning her head towards Luna. "I have found something GREAT!" She kept yelling. Dream clenched her teeth and replied with calm voice. "What is it ...sister." "LOOK!" Luna pushed a small book right into Dream face. " See? It's that book that you once lost! I FOUND IT! YAY!
Mare of the Dreams took the book and payed close attention to its cover. Luna was right. It was her old book, first one she read in her life. A story about a pony that got lost in the woods, where he found something, he never expected. "Best love story I had ever read." Dream whispered and looked back at Luna, which face was so bright thanks to that BIG smile. " Thank you sis. It means so much to me" "I know. Maybe you could read it to me? We could spend this night reading your favorite book." "Sure. Why not" Both Mares found themselves a place to sit and Dream begin reading a story, that changed her childhood. For better.*
Oh you are goooood! Short story in description, high-quality graphic representation of story in drawing, fitting well-lengthened soundtrack - [link] I hope you do more of these ^^ (Her tail is magical! @__@)
I have to say, the little story, despite the errors (that look to me to be of the "English as Second Language" sort rather than the "English is Supposedly My Native Language, However My Literacy Leaves Something to be Desired Either Because I'm an Idiot or Lazy or a Troll" sort, so I can cut you a bit of slack there), was quite sweet. The picture is nice as well, though I'm still kinda...well, iffy...about the idea of Dream...for me, I can't see it as anything other than splitting Luna in half (yes I know Luna uses the first person plural pronouns to refer to herself a lot, but I always just thought of it as a cute quirk, though now that I think about it, I wonder...)!
Really, what's up with that?