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Ok that picture took TOO LONG TO MAKE. So many thing were distracting me and I was afraid I wont be able to make it in time. And you can say I did not made it. Sorry about that. But still here is my B-day comic that show what I always wanted to get ( no, not a dog), a real friend.

I hope you like Timbie, as he is one of the pets of Team Awesome. I tried to make him as sweet as possible. Hope it worked.
A GREAT HUG TO ALL THAT FAV IT and also EVEN GREATER HUG to those that help me get that to Equestria Daily. ( I'm not sure why they don't want to show my previous comic)
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:icondizzeh89:
That was a very sweet and touching comic. The art was very well done. But you see in the second panel where her mom is holding the box, she is not using magic to levitate it. So its just in the air.
One more thing: its also in the second panel, when her mom says "B-DAY" some people who are looking at this comic might not kow what it means. And the comic will be very confusing for them. The last thing I would like to mention is Cadence in the fifth panel you should maybe make the background another colour but it's still good. the comic was very well done, very sweet and I hope you make more comics.
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:icondragon567lover:
dragon567lover Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I WANT A TIMBIE
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:icongeminice:
Geminice Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Awwwww this is cute!
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:iconprincessluna64-31:
PrincessLuna64-31 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
The adorableness is over 9000!
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:iconscorppio500:
Scorppio500 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
the puppy tho. So cute.
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:iconmylittlepony123458:
mylittlepony123458 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
SO ADORABLE
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:iconmercedesstar:
Mercedesstar Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww sooo cute
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:iconsnowygodenheart:
SnowyGodenheart Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohh Ithink I might cry tear it so special
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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
I guess that would make that the:
CRYTEARIA

XD
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:iconsnowygodenheart:
SnowyGodenheart Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You made me laugh my but off
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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Writer
It seems like I have XD
And it's my favorite thing to do, make people LOL :3
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:iconsnowygodenheart:
SnowyGodenheart Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same here
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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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:iconmew1lover:
mew1lover Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Artist
.u.
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:iconmylittlepony123458:
mylittlepony123458 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014

HEY! that is a baby timber wolf!don't joke about what it's maid of!

Rage Stare :eager: by darkmoon3636 You talk too much! Steaming Mad! STFU you idiot! Floating 

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:iconninjaturtle338:
ninjaturtle338 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student General Artist

Bark, ha its funny because he is made out of wood.

Great job.

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:iconbarryfrommars:
BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
As I said on Derpibooru, "10/10; Tears of joy in my eyes." Honestly this is a wonderful happy comic, I love it.
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:iconpinkaminadianepieplz:
Is that Lauren Fausticorn?
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:iconmylittlepony123458:
mylittlepony123458 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
I didn't know cadance had a pet timber wolf
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:iconbubblesishot46853:
bubblesishot46853 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
So cute!!!  May I hug Timbie?
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:iconheroesdoody:
HeroesDoody Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A foal and her dog ^^
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:iconbubbleberry135:
bubbleberry135 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Artist
You just made my day ^^
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:iconblacklistbrony:
BlacklistBrony Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
love it!
great artstyle and touching story.
this can be considered a masterpiece :)
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:iconkingsome:
KiNgsOmE Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AWESOME!!!!!
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:icondouble-wubstep:
Double-Wubstep Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Who is Dream?!
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:iconsierra5043:
sierra5043 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Luna's Twin Sister/ Good Nightmare Moon.
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:icondouble-wubstep:
Double-Wubstep Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Cool
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:iconfullmetal-landon:
FullMetal-Landon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Canis-genus animals (wolves, dogs, coyotes) are called pups, not cubs.
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:iconsierra5043:
sierra5043 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Well, for Wolves it does go either way. Either you can call them Pups, or you can call them cubs. It depends on which you prefer.
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:icontemporaltwins:
TemporalTwins Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE IT
very touching
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:iconmillennialdan:
MillennialDan Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist
Timber wolf puppy? I'm scared.
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:iconthps48:
thps48 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I need to play more fantasy... Hell, I need to play more Western fantasy. XD
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:iconpikminchick:
Pikminchick Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwwwww
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:iconraenboow:
RaenBoow Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
My face was warm smiling and pretty much :aww: until I saw that puppy. :iconreactionplz: haha xD It wasn't entirely.... nightmarish... in his first first impression... but yeah XD
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:iconiamcaptainman:
IamCaptainMan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well its made of solid wood, nothing else, but it cans still look cute in its own way.
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:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
D'awwww~
Lauren,you just made Cadence's day a really bright one!ALL HAIL THE DIRETOR
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:iconthorlol:
Thorlol Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Wait until he grows up. (Also I'm involuntarily reminded of A Song of Ice and Fire with the Direwolfs)
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:iconrgb64:
RGB64 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Would it technically be undead since [the timber wolves in Equestria]'re probably made of dead wood?
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:iconuay778:
uay778 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
wait whos dream
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:iconguilrel:
Guilrel Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Aww that's so sweet.
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:iconpinka13:
Pinka13 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
CUTE <3
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:iconfoal01:
Foal01 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he looks weird but thats what makes him so sweet and cute
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:iconngageman:
ngageman Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
"Thank you I always dream to have one of thease...
I will, love him, hug him and name him fluffy..."
Hmmmm.... pytanie filozoficzne.
[link]
Przepraszam nie mogłem:)
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
TOO SWEET FOR ME!
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Oh, thats so so cute, and to think that Cadence had forest beast as puppy.


And your comis is super detailed as ever, keep it up.
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:icondeathalchemist94:
DeathAlchemist94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DAAAAWWWW!!
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:iconunicorn9927:
unicorn9927 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Awwwwww....
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:iconcaustizer:
Caustizer Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
A Timber Wolf puppy? That's an interesting idea. Personally I think that what Cadence wants most is a baby (you can tell from the episodes she just loves fillies), but perhaps she is a bit young for that sort of thing in this comic.

I look forward to seeing more Team Awesome comics, provided they are safe for work lol.
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:iconiluvanimestuff:
iluvanimestuff Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
UNTIL HE GETS HUNGRY AND EAT YOU D:
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:iconravengaurd6:
ravengaurd6 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
If you rub his belly enough, he'll catch fire. ^_^
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:icongeneraldurandal:
GeneralDurandal Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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