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izzyo816 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love the necklaces! very pretty and useful 
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ShadowLDrago Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
I wonder why Luna is white here instead of dark like in the show, maybe according to you that darkness wwas the residual "scars" of Nightmare Moon's corruption which is why her coat is dark?
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forever1188123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
celestia's mane should be like the in these pictures www.google.com/search?q=grown+… mainly the first one because her mane was like that after nightmare moon returned so please fix it 
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dragonluv5 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
this takes place before nightmare moon even existed...
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kacript Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Could those be the Elements of Harmony? If so then based on the coloration of the gems they possess Celestia seems to have magic(magenta) on her crown and laughter(blue), honesty(orange), and Loyalty(red). Luna seems to have Generousity(purple) and Kindness(pink). So

Celestia:
Magic
Laughter(source of troll moments)
Honesty
Loyalty(debatable)

Luna:
Generousity
Kindness(oddly two of them)

Note I kinda guessed with Celestia having loyaty(red) since the shining of it makes it difficult to make it out as red or pink but since Luna's necklace obviously has pink Loyalty is the only elemnt unaccounted for and Celestia's necklace is the only one with a black space for that one.
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Raydhen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dont be Reckless Luna...
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dbarns514 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cccccccccccccccccccccccooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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McSqueakers Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
"I only hope that the rumors are true."

Shouldn't it say "aren't true"?
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Storylover-Vodhr Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012   Writer
Luna, why are you white?

"Oh my gosh Karen, you can't just ask people why they're white..."
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Psychoon Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
best. comment. ever.
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Storylover-Vodhr Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012   Writer
Thanks. =D
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InvaderLez Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic is awesome so far. I've been looking for a Sombra comic. :D What is "Team Awesome"?
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Randina42 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Team Awesome is what Celestia, Luna, Dream (Nightmare Moon) and Discord called themselves when they were teenagers and friends.
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Dawn079 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Luna is amazing with a pure blue mane :D
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nbgodzilla86 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
nice job on the comic i like it
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roxy-cream Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
one of the most important rule of fighting is never underestimate youre enemy
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Allanpike Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Luna's rather... confident.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Luna's colour is off, or was this intentional?

Also, in Celestia's first phrase, there should be a comma between the words "Luna" and "listen".

And in the third panel, you forgot the apostrophe "s" in "Discords"

Also, there should be a comma between "ready" and "sister" in Luna's line in panel 4.

Finally, no capital "t" in the word "the".

I know I've given you a lot to correct so far, and I know you've worked hard on getting this done; but I certainly don't want you to feel overwhelmed with all this. Just take it one correction at a time. :)
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Bonaxor Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Luna colors were intentional. All I painted in this comic are effects, lights, manes, armor pieces, eyes. I felt bodies untouched. Its like a black and white comic, with few colors.
And thanks for finding the errors. I will fix then when I will get some time.
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Dogman15 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I was going to point out the "Discord's" mistake, too.
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