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Third page of my comic.
God how hard it was to paint it....so many details, so much to work on. But Iam done with castle walls and in next part I wont have SOOOO big problems. So next part should be faster this time.
This part is actually page 3 and 4 in one. I combined them to create this longer version.
FOR INTERESTED
There are 2 easter eggs on this. One is simple you just need to look closer
Second is actually a MAJOR SPOILER for whole story of Rising Darkness. Your not gonna know what it is unless I tell you If you want to know, send me a note.... DO NOT ASK IN COMMENTS!!! And also SPOILER ALERT for those that want to know this secret.
Page painted in SAI only.
Hope you like it and as always BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT
MLP: FIM belongs to Hasbro
Comic and story is mine
Page 2 - [link]
Page 3 - its here
Page 4 and 5 [link]
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Page 10 [link]
Page 11 [link]
Page 12 [link]
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Page 18-19 [link]
Third page of my comic.
God how hard it was to paint it....so many details, so much to work on. But Iam done with castle walls and in next part I wont have SOOOO big problems. So next part should be faster this time.
This part is actually page 3 and 4 in one. I combined them to create this longer version.
FOR INTERESTED
There are 2 easter eggs on this. One is simple you just need to look closer
Second is actually a MAJOR SPOILER for whole story of Rising Darkness. Your not gonna know what it is unless I tell you If you want to know, send me a note.... DO NOT ASK IN COMMENTS!!! And also SPOILER ALERT for those that want to know this secret.
Page painted in SAI only.
Hope you like it and as always BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT
MLP: FIM belongs to Hasbro
Comic and story is mine
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© 2011 - 2024 Bonaxor
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I think that the drawing is excellent. Coloring is top-notch and the panels are well-placed and shaped for the purpose that each one serves. The poses and colors all look natural and easy on the eyes.
I find the words spoken by the omniscient narrator to be kind of arbitrary. "The quarters were in total disarray, like never before." This is already clear through the picture. The words become kind of redundant, and even distracting.
I rated a 3.5 for originality because, admittedly, the idea of the force that corrupted Luna coming back to do the same to Celestia is one that has been done before. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but you'll have to be careful that what goes on isn't cliche.
Overall, though, I think this is set to be a solid comic. Just remember that pictures can create a lot of meaning on their own and you won't always have to explain things with narration. I look forward to more.