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December 31, 2011
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MLP: FIM Rising Darkness page 3 by Bonaxor MLP: FIM Rising Darkness page 3 by Bonaxor
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Page 3 - its here:D
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Third page of my comic.

God how hard it was to paint many details, so much to work on. But Iam done with castle walls and in next part I wont have SOOOO big problems. So next part should be faster this time.

This part is actually page 3 and 4 in one. I combined them to create this longer version.


There are 2 easter eggs on this. One is simple you just need to look closer:D
Second is actually a MAJOR SPOILER for whole story of Rising Darkness. Your not gonna know what it is unless I tell you ;) If you want to know, send me a note.... DO NOT ASK IN COMMENTS!!! And also SPOILER ALERT for those that want to know this secret.

Page painted in SAI only.

Hope you like it and as always BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT:D

MLP: FIM belongs to Hasbro
Comic and story is mine :D
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I think that the drawing is excellent. Coloring is top-notch and the panels are well-placed and shaped for the purpose that each one serves. The poses and colors all look natural and easy on the eyes.

I find the words spoken by the omniscient narrator to be kind of arbitrary. "The quarters were in total disarray, like never before." This is already clear through the picture. The words become kind of redundant, and even distracting.

I rated a 3.5 for originality because, admittedly, the idea of the force that corrupted Luna coming back to do the same to Celestia is one that has been done before. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but you'll have to be careful that what goes on isn't cliche.

Overall, though, I think this is set to be a solid comic. Just remember that pictures can create a lot of meaning on their own and you won't always have to explain things with narration. I look forward to more.
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HRP4Life Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Warning guys! Luna gets abused even more in later pages. 10-16
BlackRose11A Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*to panel6* comic author: Yay im in the kitchen,  you want a sandwich?!

*back to coment* i'm sorry but thats why i like the line most horror movise and shows use," Is anyone there?" as if the expect the camera man to saw [above] love your art btw it must be hard to draw tia
kacript Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Looks like it's Celestia's turn to go evil.
DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear God, Celestia. Lookit u.
(I'm sorry I'll go now xD)
Derpygal Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
seriously? I kinda feel sad that Luna keeps getting vanished and banished
Nyancat20 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
For some reason, this made me laugh.
FrostTheArticFox Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
'strucked' ??????
silvermoon442 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! :O
KikiWolfHeart Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
OmiGAH! Why Tia!! Reading them all!
Mayleebell24 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You mean Understand not uderstand... but who care's O wells?
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