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I find the words spoken by the omniscient narrator to be kind of arbitrary. "The quarters were in total disarray, like never before." This is already clear through the picture. The words become kind of redundant, and even distracting.
I rated a 3.5 for originality because, admittedly, the idea of the force that corrupted Luna coming back to do the same to Celestia is one that has been done before. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but you'll have to be careful that what goes on isn't cliche.
Overall, though, I think this is set to be a solid comic. Just remember that pictures can create a lot of meaning on their own and you won't always have to explain things with narration. I look forward to more.
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