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MLP: FIM Rising Darkness by Bonaxor MLP: FIM Rising Darkness by Bonaxor
First Page of my upcoming comics.
Page 2 [link]
Page 3 [link]
Page 4 and 5 [link]
Page 6 [link]
Page 7 [link]
Page 8 [link]
Page 9 [link]
Page 10 [link]
Page 11 [link]
Page 12 [link]
Page 13 [link]
Page 14 [link]
Page 15 [link]
Page 16 [link]
Page 17 [link]
Page 18-19 [link]
Pic was mostly hand made by me, only Canterlot was taken from different source cuz it would take too long for me to draw it properly.

Comments are welcome.

EDIT. Changed the text a bit:D

MLP: FIM belongs to Hasbro
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:iconpixelblujay:
PixelBlujay Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
nice story
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:iconvarjo-kettu:
Varjo-Kettu Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Very interesting story.
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:iconrainbowtwinkle:
RainbowTwinkle Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Very interesting!
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:iconphenometron:
Phenometron Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
The Canterlot Castle is one of Equestria's most memorable places.
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:iconi-love-daisy:
i-love-daisy Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
your comic is so AWSOME! i love it
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:iconmeireineko:
MeiReiNeko Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
Holy crap I smell epicness!
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:iconqwertyo76:
qwertyo76 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I already like the shot of Canterlot and you reinforcing the idea that Luna (Not just NMM,) can turn to "smoke." Now I read!
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:iconbladergirl101:
BladerGirl101 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012   General Artist
Ooh I see sparkly blue stuff
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:iconwallie98:
Wallie98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOw, I bet that castle took forever to draw :O
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
It did not:D I tried but it went TOTALLY wrong. So I had to use Canterlot from other pic.
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:iconwallie98:
Wallie98 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh ok, :3
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:iconfavo666:
Favo666 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Piecefull = full of pieces?
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NO:( Its just my damn mistake:( :iconsadlunaplz:
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:iconfavo666:
Favo666 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
I know, man. I was just kidding! But if you think you made mistakes, here's a tip: have somepony to proofread it for you.
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I already did that m8;) I found a right person to do that.

Sorry that I used caps on NO I was just angry on myself that even after so many lessons of English I still got problems.
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:iconneatnit:
NeatNit Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
Can't you update the picture and fix it? (I've never uploaded anything but I've seen some descriptions talk about updating/fixing stuff)
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sure I can and I will but first a friend must fix all mistakes:D
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
I, too, would recommend getting somebody to edit your text. Really, it's pretty much always good to have somebody else look over any creative work before sharing it with the world, particularly if you are either not a native English speaker or one of the unfortunately common people who can't speak their own language.

I personally would write the text of this page this way (although there are some judgement calls to be made about how to best adjust your words to sound like natural English with as little change as possible):
"A peaceful night in Canterlot Castle. While ponies across the kingdom rejoice, celebrating Nightmare Night, here there is blissful silence that envelops and soothes Celestia, tired from a hard day of ruling. She knows her protégés are safe under the watchful eye of Princess Luna. She can rely on her.
But can she feel safe in her royal chambers? You never know what stranger may knock at your door."
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I will get somebody to help me:( Its just that....I wanted to....well...practice my english writing. AAAA damn with this thing...if my comic gonna be worst because of such thing as spelling errors than I prefer to find someone to help me than do everything ALONE:(

Is that text without any mistakes? If yes than maybe, if you give me permission, i could put it on this page?
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:iconfangs-of-the-nidhogg:
I take it English is not your first language?
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
No:icontrollestia2plz:
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:icondejected0:
Dejected0 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It would seem so. I am quite sure anyone who is fluent in English would be more than willing to make some corrections!
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:iconspangladesh:
Spangladesh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would have to guess that as well. The first clue for me was "piecefull" rather than the correct "peaceful."
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:icondiosadelkaos:
diosadelkaos Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
I knew it!! princess luna has escaped from celestia... waiting to see next comic page
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
But there are next;) Go and see them when I add links under this one.
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:icondiosadelkaos:
diosadelkaos Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
that's right!!! let see then...
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:iconcoltinthemoon:
ColtintheMoon Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There's a lower level in Canterlot that is not normlly shown. in Cutie mrk chronicles, outside the window we see the silohuette of "Canterlot"
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:iconsechserpackung:
Sechserpackung Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
*waits for more*
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
There will be next part but first I need to finish requested pic for my friend:)
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:iconrocktavia555:
Rocktavia555 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
FREAKIN' SPELLING
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I know sorry for that:( Gonna find someone to help me with text.
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:iconrocktavia555:
Rocktavia555 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Just put it in the description!
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:iconpuffinstudios:
PUFFINSTUDIOS Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME PICTURE!
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:iconbonaxor:
Bonaxor Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much m8. Stay tuned for next pages of hand maded comics comming soon.
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