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Dream's Reality - cover art by Bonaxor Dream's Reality - cover art by Bonaxor
A cover art I made for a fan- fic story that is being wrote by my friend. :iconcaustizer:

Here you have link to Chapter one. [link]

Story is very interesting from my point of view, and he really know how to give all the characters a good personality. So go there and read it. AND if you can give him your feedback, comment his story, It REALLY helps him in work.
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Sorry I've taken so long to review this picture but it's something that's kind of slipped between the cracks. The first thing I'm going to look at in detail is the background and 'decorations'. I like how the design for the chest pieces feel like they are 'early' rather then relating to their modern day attire. The Crowns are sort of bland and stick out at odd angles though, which either implies that Light is more practical then artistic with her designs or that not enough thought was put into them compared to the rest of the picture.

Eclipse's presence is well done in this picture, with the subtle smoking details giving him a villainous appearance. It's clear that he likes what he is seeing here with the twins falling into his trap.

Now about the twins themselves. From looking at their expressions you can definitely tell important traits in the characters themselves. Luna looks younger, and a lot more worried about what she is seeing compared to Dream who seems a bit eager to investigate the orb's secrets.

It's worth mentioning for anyone unfamiliar with the story that the orb is actually the World of Ponies, or better known as Ancient Equestria.

Anyway despite some minor criticisms (such as them not possessing the cloaks that mother made for them, and the crowns) I think this is a great piece of cover art for our story and hopefully it generates the attention it deserves.

Caustizer.
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Venom2204 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Is Dream the older sister?
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DragonwarlordX Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Good job :D

This cover gives me a bad feeling
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statoose Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012   Digital Artist
Very nice! The lighting in particular is quite a nice touch!
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HiveLordLusa Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm going to have to read that story later.
'Cause the cover is awesome! (That both was and wasn't a pun ;)) :D
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Kendell2 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Reminds me of 'I've Got Friends On The Other Side'. Awesome job though!
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MrSpartin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe I will go check it out.
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GeneralDurandal Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
cool
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IceStormy Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
is that dark star aka eclipse?
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Bonaxor Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Read The Fan-Fic. Please. It will describe everything to you better then I do.
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks awesome so far :D
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