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A story to remember by Bonaxor A story to remember by Bonaxor
Story for this comic was done by my friend. If it wasn't for him it would never be done. Only the middle panel was my addition.
For those interested in WHAT IS on the middle panel go here [link]

This is how dreaming ponies see the Mare of the Dreams, if they menage to see through the aura of sleeping mind. And if they see her... they automatically wake up and forget that they saw her.

And I need more such ideas for short comic ( it can be with Team Awesome, Main 6 or princesses) so if you can think of something funny I might use it later to make a comic like this one.

Also I'm opened for commissions. All rules are here. [link]
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:iconthestorm117:
...:iconspittingcerealguyplz: This sums up how I reacted to this. Now for critique... The vision you have on this is clear; Twilight sends letter, it gets mixed up, Celestia takes it wrong way. Profit. The technique used is also quite good, the color and expressions really gives the comic more depth. I couldn't help but laugh at Twilight's expression on the last panel. The impact is also quite good, defiantly having a real LOL factor, which is reinforced by the expressions and the dialogue which make the strip great. Now, the only thing I will criticize is the originality. This reminds me a little bit too much of a fic called "Do you want to know?" which has a similar plot in where Twilight sends Celestia the wrong letter, and confusion ensues. That aside, great piece overall :iconderpylaplz:
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i liked the funny story line and "shock factor" of the comic, made me laugh! very good. just one thing... in the very first panel twilight has a bit of super jaw/ chin powers lol i think the rest is very good! the last panels' art is phenomenal


..so thats it. i dont have much more to say but, there is a 100 word minimum so haha ignore the rest of this please! (i swear im not a troll/ douchebag)








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:iconluna9130:
luna9130 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
xD HAHAHA
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:icontrantercloud101:
TranterCloud101 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student Artist
Ahh, heck naw.
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Filmographer
 :iconwtfisthisplz:   HNNNGGGG 
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:iconmissrandomnomad0o:
MissRandomNomad0o Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
I'll just forget I ever saw this....
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconmolestiaplz:

:iconmolestiafrontplz:
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:iconsomeguy713:
someguy713 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
I don't like that staring its scaring me D:
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconrarityderpplz:
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:iconsomeguy713:
someguy713 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
;-;
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconsilverlayfacehoofplz: :iconsaysplz: NU U STAER ME :iconsaysendplz:
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:iconsomeguy713:
someguy713 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
Some one said stare Clem Epic face 
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconmegustaplz: :iconmolestiaplz:Lee Epic Dance 
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:iconsomeguy713:
someguy713 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
y u put pic of molestia u dont du dat because molestia scares me :c
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:iconkironstrife:
KironStrife Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I belive the proper response would be, "Oh ship!"
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:iconnitroshock800:
NitroShock800 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Molestia returns
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:icon0liviahorse:
0liviahorse Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
F**
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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
:iconmolestiaplz: < My my, Twilight you seem a little red, do you have a fever? Let me help you with that...
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:iconmew1lover:
mew1lover Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Artist
0 ^0
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:iconwolves-are-coool:
Wolves-are-coool Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
PFTFTFTFTFTFT-BWAHAHAHA
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:iconmr-hybrid:
Mr-Hybrid Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Slendy, stop being so pervy
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:iconkirbymaster8:
kirbymaster8 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
:iconmolestiafrontplz:.......Meme (Popcorn) [V1]

CELESTIA APPROVES





me::ew: :yuck: 
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:iconsamantha062104:
Samantha062104 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i see slenderman, and i'm saying slenderman not slendermane, in panel 3.

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:iconunknownalicorn:
UnknownAlicorn Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahahahhahaahhahahahahahahahhahhah!!!!!!!!!!!!:D (Big Grin) 
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:icontigrospottystripes:
TigroSpottystripes Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Night Fury!!!!!
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:icondurison:
Durison Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Twilight just pissed herself.

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:iconpreditor9746:
preditor9746 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student General Artist
who wrote this story
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:icondovyzz:
dovyzz Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
You actually made me laugh out loud that's a rare feat to accomplish.
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:icongermanyofthesand:
GermanyOfTheSand Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconterminalglow:
TerminalGlow Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm laughing like crazy. xD It's so awkward!!
I'm usually not into TwiLestia, but this is just gold.
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:iconchaotic-sky-envoy:
chaotic-sky-envoy Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
twilight: it wasnt a dream D:
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:iconavatarxadventuretime:
AvatarxAdventureTime Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconmolestiaplz: strikes again
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:iconfluttershy-studios:
Fluttershy-Studios Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Why is Nightmare Moon in the 4th panel?
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Filmographer
With a shocked expression? liek duh she is da narrateur :3 :P
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:iconkittiesgoderp:
kittiesgoderp Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
LOL
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:iconmorlord:
Morlord Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Loooooooooooooooool xD awesome shock moment^^
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:iconkeldeofangirl1:
keldeofangirl1 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
nightmare moon : HA HA AH HA HA *pulls out a video camera* THIS IS SOOO GOING ON MY BLOG!!! MWHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA :laughter:
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
girl, try to survive the night...
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:iconfisheadc:
fisheadC Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Molestia returns
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:iconthetruewerepyre:
TheTrueWerepyre Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD OMG. And Why is Slenderman in Panel three?
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:iconalterthechronicle10:
AltertheChronicle10 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wha... oh my god! urk urk, I'm fine... urk!
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:iconchallenger88:
challenger88 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmolestiaplz:
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:icondevildragon1:
devildragon1 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
lol
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:iconterolie:
Terolie Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Artist
Oh wow! bedhair celestia is all kinds of right!
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:iconmlddim123:
Mlddim123 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconspittingcerealguyplz: Slenderman is panel 3. WTF LOL.
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:iconsolidsanchez:
SolidSanchez Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Dat last panel... Grinning Celestia is da best!
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:iconlllrafaelyay:
lllRafaelyay Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl:
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:iconvenom2204:
Venom2204 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Photographer
ust.......not...........laugh................BWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

This is so funny!!
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:iconaqomxg:
AqomXG Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Epic fail twi...xD
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:iconfillyfeill:
fillyfeill Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
WIN!
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:iconxxblue-thunderxx:
XxBlue-ThunderxX Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student General Artist
ohh noes Molestia is back

wait luna is molestia

watch Friendshipis witchcraft to get my joke
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:iconrazoku:
Razoku Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
D:
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